The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart provides information about the
percentage
of five city residents in Australia.
Overall
, it is clear from the chart that the percentage
of those who went to the cafe for coffee
or tea in the last
4 week
increased, Fix the agreement mistake
weeks
while
opposite
was true in the Correct article usage
the opposite
percentage
of people who bought fresh espresso in the last
4 weeks.
According to
what is shown,it is noticeable that Malboune
and Hobart showed the same proportion of people who went to Correct your spelling
Melbourne
Add an article
a cafe
the cafe
cafe
for Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
coffee
or tea in the last
4 weeks,by around 64% respectively. Sydney illustrates a similar trend
by above 60%. However
, the percentage
in Brisbane decreased by almost 56%, while
Adelaide showed under 50%.
On the other hand
, looking at the feedback in more detail, we can see that consumers in Brisbane and Hobart provided an upward trend
by above 50%,to bought
instant Change the form of the verb
buy
coffee
in the last
4 weeks, while
Adelaide register
Wrong verb form
registered
similar
Correct article usage
a similar
trend
of 50%,
before fell rapidly to just under 46%.
one notable point is people who bought fresh Remove the comma
apply
coffee
showed the lowest trend
for the whole period by just under 45% for three cities which are Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart ,while
both Brisbane and Adelaide had an equal proportions of just over 30%.Submitted by hafsaalbadi199 on
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