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The chart below shows the percentage of adults who received qualifications from a range of education providers in three years. The chart below shows the percentage of adults who received qualifications from a range of education providers in three years.

The chart below shows the percentage of adults who received qualifications from a range of education providers in three years. The chart below shows the percentage of adults who received qualifications from a range of education providers in three years.
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The provided bar chart gives the comparative data about males and
females
 in distinctive
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 groups who are doing practical activity in Australia during the period of 2010. The data is given in percentages, and can be split
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, it is
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 seen that
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 greater number of
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women
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 who
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 25 to over 65
years
 old had physical exercise than those men except the aged group of 15 to 24. Now, turning to the details of
females
, the figure of 45 to 54 aged
females
 who passed the physical exercise accounted for 53.3
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 which
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significant
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 higher than males by 10.2
percent
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. Having
complete
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this
 stage, more males who exercised
physical
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body
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 under 24
years
 old than women
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 the same
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.  
Additionally
, the Physical activities
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 the
age
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ages
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 of 55 to 64
years
 old experienced a dramatic larger in women as the second largest figure. Comparatively, the proportion of keep doing activities of
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females
 witnessed a wide range of differences by13 % among 35 to 44 age respectively. The chart
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 of both
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unisex spent time
of
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physically
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activites
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activities
 over 65
years
 old that were
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 approximately 47%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words females, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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