The chart below gives information about the production of grains, measured in million metric tons, from the years 2010 to 2015, with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates some data regarding the grains production, which are
wheat
, barley, maize, and rice during the period from 2010 until a projection of the same crops’ production in 2030.
From an overall
perspective, the highest rates of crops
outcomes were Change the noun form
crop
wheat
and barley; whereas
, the lowest two proportions of grains
production were rice and maize.
On the one hand, the Change the noun form
grain
wheat
was experienced an increasing rates
from the beginning to the end. It Correct the article-noun agreement
an increasing rate
increasing rates
was
accounted for 100 in 2010 Unnecessary verb
apply
until
it will reach 110 in 2030. Correct word choice
and
However
, the number of barley will experience 100 million metric tons in 2030, which was considered the same amount of wheat
crop in 2010.
On the other hand
, the
rice was forecasted to be the lowest one of Correct article usage
apply
the
all grains which Remove the article
apply
was
witnessed 24.7 in 2010 and will grow almost 1 Change the verb form
were
milion
Correct your spelling
million
ton
until it Fix the agreement mistake
tons
reach
2030.Change the verb form
reaches
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