It is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings. This money should be spent on building modern buildings instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

A lot of

money

need

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to fix and look after old

buildings

and

this fees

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ought to

save

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up

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on luxury

buildings

instead

. I tend to disagree with

this

idea because of the benefits of conserving old

buildings

on the economy, environment, pollution and

people

's health and it is more economical to conserve

buildings

, another point is that some old

buildings

are historic.

On the other hand

, construction and demolition will produce a lot of industrial waste and it damages the

government

and

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when the

government

keeps old

buildings

it saves too much

money

and the

government

might

be spent

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spend

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it into

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into

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the processing environment.

On the other hand

, during construction air

is

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pollution especially affects

people

living around and when pollution is

fewer

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less

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people

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health is better and the

government

will not waste

money

for

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on

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medical costs. Another point to consider is that

improvement

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and keeping ancient

buildings

pays out

money

and

this

money

should

be invest

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be invested

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for

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in

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new

buildings

and in my opinion, the

government

should spend too much

money

for

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on

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keeping safe and

repair

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repairing

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old

buildings

actually crucial places in

this

case, historic

buildings

or traditional houses because they are old and ancient and it is very important for keeping them. A good reason for

what

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that

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If some old

buildings

demolition

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are demolished

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and construction modern

buildings

instead

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. Including, many old

buildings

are broken down or the

government

might be developing and transforming a

neighborhood

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neighbourhood

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and constructing luxury

buildings

or skyscrapers.

Finally

, In general, I tend to disagree because it is a more economical project and it might be damaging

for

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to

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the environment and

people

's health.