The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.
The
line
graph illustrates the level of visitors in
a particular Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. In general, two out of three lines Change preposition
to
were
a dramatic upward trend except the triangle's Verb problem
had
line
. However
, each line
had its difficulty to
the others.
The Change preposition
with
visistors
who are staying on Correct your spelling
visitors
island
(triangle's Correct article usage
the island
line
) was the most remarkable line
among three
lines. In the Correct article usage
the three
intial
two years (2010 and 2011), there was the same number of tourists, at 0,75 Correct your spelling
initial
millions
. After that, Change to singular
million
this
figure was growing up to 1.5 millions
in 2013 and unchanging until 2015. Change to singular
million
Finally
, it decreased shortly to 1.25 millions
(2016) and went back to 1.5 Change to singular
million
millionsin
2017.
The Correct your spelling
million in
millions
millions in
line
of visitors who staying
on cruise ships was lower than the others. Wrong verb form
stayed
Nevertheless
, from 2010 to 2012, there was a slight fluctuation from 0.25 to 0.5 and back to 0.25 millions
in 2012. During the next five years, it rose significantly from 0.25 Change to singular
million
millions
to 2 Change to singular
million
millions
.Change to singular
million
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