Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays,

due to

the

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widespread

of

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globalisation,

internet

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the internet

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has been an important aspect

in

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this

modern era, most of the population, especially youngsters have been using it for the

use

of,

for example

, study and social.

This

essay will discuss whether or not improving internet access is more important for governments to invest

than

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improving public

transportation

. In Indonesia, massive infrastructure projects develop,

such

as roads. The government is actively building toll roads and approximately 73% of it is operating now for populations to

use

. In Jakarta, they are continuing the growth of public

transportation

for the community to

use

, including but not limited to buses and trains.

However

, as an archipelago country, there are a lot of small islands

surround

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Indonesia and many small cities that

lacks

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the

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transportation

. In an interview, there was a student who asked why their place

lacks

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public transport. The lack of

this

facility affects their education since they have to pay for a driver to send them to school.

In contrast

, the developed countries provide transport for

public

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the public

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to

use

as it is very convenient and safe. Owning vehicles is good,

nevertheless

, it increases the air

pollutions

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especially

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in cities and

volume

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of the road which

basically

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not a win-win solution.

Therefore

,

this

is the reason why the government should consider the development of

transportation

for a better environment. In conclusion, internet access is beneficial but

however

,

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government must urge the development of public

transportation

for the prosperity of mankind.