You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently a new neighbour moved in and has been making a lot of noise, which disturbs you. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: *Explain the situation *Describe why it bothers you *Suggest a solution
Dear Mr. Raman,
How have you been?
I am writing
this
letter to complain about my new neighbour making loud noises the whole night
.
Let me explain my situation to you. Our neighbour played loud music at night
and had parties with his friends all night
. Because of that, I would not be concentrate on my daily work.
I have been working 12 Hours a day In an Amazon warehouse, It Is a very physically challenging job as you know. Due to
that, I have to rest at least 8 hours At nighttime to relax my body and perform my day-to-day tasks but, at night
time a next-door neighbour continuously plays loud Hip-hop music and has a party with his friends. That's bothers me a lot to go too bad.
Here I would like to suggest a very good solution, you just need to tell them politely to lower the speaker's volume and avoid late-night
celebrations.
I hope this
matter will be resolved as soon as possible.
Yours Sincerely,
Biren PatelSubmitted by birenp046 on
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Enhancing logical structure could involve organizing your ideas more clearly. Start by introducing the problem, followed by detailed explanation, and concluding with your suggestions for resolution.
task achievement
For task response, ensure all aspects of the prompt are addressed thoroughly. While you have covered the main points, adding more specific details about how the noise affects your daily life would enrich your response.
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Use a more consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter. While your tone is mostly suitable, maintaining a formal yet polite tone consistently can improve the overall effectiveness of your letter.