The culture of different places are now looking similar in modern times. What do you think are the causes of this? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

The cultural etiquette of various places looks exactly the same in modern times. The primary causes of
this
might be city planners of different economic and commerce hubs throughout the
world
, employing similar
architecture
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styles, and
also
, currently we live in a globalized village where
ideas
travel at near light speed,
similarly
the
culture
in
this
globalised village travels from
one
economic hub to another, and the successful
ideas
are
emmulated
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emulated
by all the other cultures across
this
world
. I believe
this
has been a positive trend, as people from diverse backgrounds have something in common across
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globe. In the 1920s when the Empire State Building was built, it was the envy of the
world
, as it was the tallest man-made structure till
then
, as city planners saw the potential of high-rise buildings it began a spree of construction to build tall buildings.
Hence
, as
culture
flows downwards from the elites and the intellectuals,
this
fascination with a particular
architecture
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style spread throughout the
world
,
along with
it a
similar looking
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culture
around the
world
.
For example
, in UAE the tallest building in the
world
Burj-Khalifa was designed by a firm in
USA
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. So,
culture
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of
USA
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the USA
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flowed into
UAE
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through its
architecture
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style. Presently, with the acceptance of digital media,
ideas
from
one
part of the
world
spread to another part of the
world
like wildfire,
along with
the idea, the creator's identity and
culture
,
also
flow
along with
the idea, causing successful
ideas
from
one
part of the
world
to be
emmulated
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emulated
by the other parts of the
world
.
For example
, in
USA
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the USA
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when chatGPT was launched, the idea of the neural network implemented by the company spread across the globe, producing KisaanGPT a large language model for farmers in India.
Therefore
, I believe that
such
interactions between diverse
background
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of people in past times
,
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would be unheard of, but in present times
this
has produced many
oppurtunities
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opportunities
and irrespective of
one
's socioeconomic background, they find commonality with a person
half-way
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across the continent. In conclusion, the
culture
of various places looks the same
due to
similar
architecture
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styles and
due to
similar beliefs that people hold caused by mass acceptance of digital media, and
this
has uplifted the masses irrespective of the background they come from.
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