New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

There is an ongoing debate surrounding whether the changes in the way children

spending

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their spare

times

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due to

modern

technologies

are beneficial or not.

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writer holds a notion that the drawbacks of being addicted to computer

games

is

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outweighed by the benefits of the diversity of

hobbies

and the easy

access

to modern

entertainments

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. One of the main beneficial aspects of

technologies

changing how

teenagers

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their spare time is the large quantity of

hobbies

. To clarify, the Internet provides

youngsters

different

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types of entertainment including computer

games

or

informations

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about new

kind

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of sports.

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,

teenagers

won't

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getting

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bored or dissatisfied

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of

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provided

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hobbies

. Take South Korea as an illustration, where developers provide a

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large

number of entertainment on the Internet leading to the rise of excitement trend among

teenagers

. Another advantageous factor worth noting is that contemporary

technologies

give

youngsters

easier

access

to

some

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digital

entertainments

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.

That is

to say,

youngsters

are able to

access

to

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apply

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new digital

hobbies

without spending huge

amount

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of money to pay for them.

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situation leads to

the

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widespread interest which

are

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exciting and available for everyone of all ages.

For instance

, consider Vietnam, where

teenagers

have

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access

to different movies without buying tickets

for

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cinema

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. There

is

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,

however

, some arguments surrounding the addiction of

teenagers

towards computers or mobile

phones'

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game

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games

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.

In other words

, some parents worried about their children playing

games

on their

phone

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without getting outside

and

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leading to their health problems.

This

argument has credibility,

however

, it can be discredited because

technologies

provide

youngsters

social

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with social

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network

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networks

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, where they can develop their digital or

sport

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hobbies

. In conclusion, modern

technologies

could

leads

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to the addiction to

games

on computers and phones;

nevertheless

, it can be outweighed by the diverse types of

hobbies

and the

available

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of digital entertainment.

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, the

changing

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changes

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of

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children's spare time activity caused by contemporary

technologies

have more beneficial

effect

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effects

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than drawbacks.