The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance
of
a graph depicts the total number of Caribbean Change preposition
at
Island's
visitors and the breakdown based on Change noun form
Island
accomodation
chosen over the course of seven years, starting from 2010 to 2017.
In Correct your spelling
accommodation
generall
, the total number of tourists visiting Correct your spelling
general
Caribbean
Correct article usage
the Caribbean
Island
increased significantly Fix the agreement mistake
Islands
as well as
those who stayed on cruise ships and on island
.
The line graph saw an upward trend for total tourists Add an article
the island
in
Caribbean Change preposition
on
Island
. It climbed from only 1 millions
to approximately 2,75 Change to a singular noun
million
millions
in 2015, almost threefold higher than the starting point. Change to singular
million
Eventhough
a stagnancy happened between 2015 to 2016, it Correct your spelling
Even though
then
raised
again up to 1 Verb problem
rose
millions
in 2017.
To be specific, Change to singular
million
majority
of the travellers preferred staying on Correct article usage
the majority
island
. It started at 0,75 Add an article
the island
millions
in 2010 and continued to grow to 1,5 Change to singular
million
millions
until 2017 with a pitfall in 2016 at 1,25 Change to singular
million
millions
. Meanwhile, cruise ships hovered at the range of 0,25 Change to singular
million
millions
to 0,5 Change to singular
million
millions
in the first four Change to singular
million
year
before hiking to 2 Change to a plural noun
years
millions
Change to singular
million
at the end
of the year presented, surpassing the total tourists
living on Correct quantifier usage
number of tourists
island
in 2016.Add an article
an island
the island
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