**The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.** **Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.**
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The graph shows the proportion of the total
people
who live in cities
in Philippines
, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia between 1970 and 2020, with projections for 2030 and 2040.
On the one hand, accounted Correct article usage
the Philippines
approximately
Change preposition
for approximately
at
30%, Malaysia was the second Change preposition
apply
country
who has urban
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an urban
the urban
population
. The total population
rose in 2020 at around 75%. In addition
to that, the country
predicted
to have almost 80% of its Add a missing verb
is predicted
people
living in the cities
. Conversely
, Indonesia was
the least Verb problem
has
country
who has people
living in the cities
at
around 10% of its Change preposition
apply
population
. However
, recorded roughly at 50%, the population
had a significant increment in 2020. The number then
projected to Add a missing verb
is then
have
around 60% in 2040.
Verb problem
be
On the other hand
, Philippines
was the top Correct article usage
the Philippines
country
who has the most people
living in the cities
with just above 30% of its total population
in 1970. After that, the cities
’ population
had
fluctuated and reached its peak Unnecessary verb
apply
just
under 50% in 1990. Change preposition
of just
However
, the number then
projected to have its
Change the word
a
population
increase roughly above 50% in 2040.
Overall
, total
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the total
population
in the cities
among the countries increased over the time period. The projection also
shown
the total Wrong verb form
shows
population
progressively grow from 2030 to 2040.Submitted by riki
on
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