The chart below shows the percentage of people in the UK who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day between 2001 and 2008
The bar chart illustrates the
percentage
of men
, women
and children who eats
five different portions of fruits and vegetables in the UK from 2001 to 2008. Change the verb form
eat
Overall
, it can be seen that,
Remove the comma
apply
women
are the largest consumers whilst men
and children followed the same trend throughout the given period.
The percentage
of women
who consumes
fruits and vegetables started off at slightly above 20% in 2001 followed by Correct subject-verb agreement
consume
increase
in the next five years till it reached its peak which was way above 30% in 2006. Add an article
an increase
Then
, it was followed by a decrease in the remainder year.
However
, men
and women
followed same
trend, with the first three years having the same Change the article
the same
percentage
( men
approximately 17%, children approximately 13% respectively). More so, the percentage
increased gradually from 2004 to 2006 by 5% each year , after then
a gradual fall in the remaining years to reach approximately 25% for both.Submitted by pauly837 on
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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