The chart below shows the percentage of people in the UK who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day between 2001 and 2008

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of

men

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,

women

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and children who

eats

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five different portions of fruits and vegetables in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

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, it can be seen that

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women

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are the largest consumers whilst

men

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and children followed the same trend throughout the given period. The

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of

women

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who

consumes

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fruits and vegetables started off at slightly above 20% in 2001 followed by

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in the next five years till it reached its peak which was way above 30% in 2006.

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, it was followed by a decrease in the remainder year.

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,

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and

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followed

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trend, with the first three years having the same

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(

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approximately 17%, children approximately 13% respectively). More so, the

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increased gradually from 2004 to 2006 by 5% each year , after

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a gradual fall in the remaining years to reach approximately 25% for both.