The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.

The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.
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The line chart illustrates both cities Brisbane and
Canberra
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with respect to average daily temperatures.
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, the bar graph demonstrates the number of rainy days in the same cities as well.
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, it is clear from the data above that Brisbane has the highest temperature compared with
Canberra
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, specifically in the second month of the year, with respect to 30 degrees.
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Canberra
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has noticed to be the lowest in Jun. As shown there has been a significant decrease in the temperature of the
Canberra
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- minimum line, starting with Feb and ending in Jun followed by the same value of changes but with an upward increase.
Canberra
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- maximum line has decreased so dramatically, from 27 to 10.5 degrees in Feb until Jul respectively.
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, the rainfall in
Canberra
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has maintained the same level in terms of the first month to the end of May. But In Brisbane Jan, Feb and Mar have presented an enormous number of rainfall days which reached 14 days.
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