The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The given graph shows the information about the using consumer durables in Britain during eleven years. In general, what stands out from the figure is that the most popular electronic item was the Television from the others and the least used durables was the Dishwasher. At the beginning of the period, in 1972
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Television consisted of 93%,
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the number of TV electronics increased gradually to 98% in 1982. In the second position of electronic-owned popularity was the Vacuum Cleaner which stood at 87% in 1972. Over 10 years the using of
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consumer rose to 95% but
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there were zero users.
On the other hand
, the Telephone and the Central Heating stood at 42% and 37% respectively in 1972. Throughout the given period the number of users of telephone and central heating increased dramatically, if to be more specific the numbers were doubled and consist of 77% and 64%. Less chosen electronic households were video and dishwashers. Using of dishwashers in Britain started in 1978, only 3% of the population is interested in
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electronic, but we cannot see a huge increase. The user item as the Video started to use in 1983 and there were 18%.
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