A restaurant has placed am advertisementfor waitres and waitressesin your local newspaper . Write a letter to restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: •explain waht you are currently doing •describe your suitability for this area of work •say when you can attend an interview
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Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to apply for the waiter position in your restaurant "Sher" which is located at Times Steert that
l
read an advertisement from a local newspaper . I would really appreciate it if you could spend a little time to further
discuss my candidacy in an interview .
Now l
would like to tell you about what l
am currently doing. I am studing
at Medical Correct your spelling
studying
university
which is located near your restaurant. I am a student and Capitalize word
University
l
would like to cover money
which my dad Correct article usage
the money
spend
Correct subject-verb agreement
spends
for
my studies . I mean Change preposition
on
l
decided to pay back a
money to my father which is already spend for me . Remove the article
apply
That is
why l
am writing this
letter to apply for the job.
I feel that l
am the most suitable condidate
for Correct your spelling
candidate
this
area of work because of my ambition and drive to make a change. Although
l
am a native English speaker and have ample knowledge of Spanish and Chinese . In
addition
Add a comma
addition,
l
live so close to your restaurant which can only take 5 minutes walk
. It would be an honour to start my career with your company and Add the particle
to walk
l
am confident that l
will be an asset to the business.
Although
, l
need to ask you about an interview that
when Correct word choice
apply
l
can attend an interview? I appreciate your consideration for
Change preposition
of
this
application and look forward to hearing from you .
Yours faithfully
Senorita Grenger
Correct your spelling
Granger
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Grammar and Spelling
Ensure to proofread your letter to correct any spelling or grammatical errors. For instance, 'Times Steert' should be 'Times Street', 'studing' should be 'studying', and 'condidate' should be 'candidate'. Additionally, avoid using shorthand phrases like 'l' in formal letters; instead, use 'I'.
Logical Structure
Try to structure your letter with clear paragraphs, each dedicated to a specific topic as outlined in the task prompt. For instance, one paragraph about what you are currently doing, another about your suitability, and a final one about potential interview times.
Task Achievement
When discussing your suitability for the job, provide more specific examples of your experience or skills that make you a good fit. Mentioning your language skills is excellent, but you could also include any previous customer service experience or qualities like patience, communication skills, or the ability to work under pressure.
Language Variety
Consider using more varied sentence structures to make your writing more engaging. This can include a mix of simple, compound, and complex sentences. Doing so will help to keep the reader's attention and demonstrate a higher level of English proficiency.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite