Your next-door neighboor owns a small dog that barks throught the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighboor requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: your reason for writing what you would like to happen a nice, respectful style
Dear Sir or Madam
I would to take a moment to let you know that
I
your Correct pronoun usage
apply
dog
break my nervous everyday
. Your small Replace the word
every day
dog
barks throughout the day and the night then
it destroyed my family and other neighboors
quiet life.
I can not concentrate on my own studies and my family can not relax. Change noun form
neighboors'
neighboor's
Moreover
my dad works online and your Add a comma
Moreover,
dog
's barks break his attention for his work. As a result
, his projects increase day by day. Also
we cannot Add a comma
Also,
sleeo
whole the night because of your Correct your spelling
sleep
dog
.
I would like to say that I saw the advertisiment
yesterday. I read that our town had Correct your spelling
advertisement
place
where look after dogs and cats. Add an article
a place
Therefore
you can bring your dog
there. If you want
see your Add the particle
want to
dog
or spend time with your dog
anytime you can go there and then
they give your
Correct pronoun usage
you your
dog
.
I think you do not get me wrong. I hope you solve this
problem as soon as possible.
I look forward to your response.
Yours faithfully
FeruzabonuSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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Task Achievement
Ensure you clearly introduce the reason for writing at the beginning to make your intention clear.
Coherence & Cohesion
Include more structured paragraphs, each focusing on a single aspect of the issue for better coherence.
Coherence & Cohesion
Using a variety of sentence structures and linking words can improve the flow of your letter.
Task Achievement
Polish your letter with a more respectful tone by suggesting solutions politely and expressing understanding towards your neighbour's situation.
General Advice
Review grammar and sentence construction for clear communication.
General Advice
Remember to address your neighbor politely, using 'Dear [Neighbor's Name]' if known, for a more personal touch.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.