In recent times, many people are making the decision to live alone. What are the causes of this? Does it have positive or negative impacts?

Nowadays .the majority of people are making decisions to live alone in
this
essay I am discussing the positive and negative views.
Firstly
.there are a lot of advantages so , first is good for any
person
because it is freedom in
this
life so it is important that people who have freedom in all in
this
life the most important thing
for example
:
peole
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people
who need to buy
car
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a car
the car
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but without talking with
person
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a person
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or taking the opinion of
other
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another person
other people
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person
that is
fine
more over
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moreover
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, it is
nescarory
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miscarry
for any
person
to having
opinion
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an opinion
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about
any thing
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anything
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so
that is
beautiful for any humans are living individually .
Secondly
,there are negative first point is
this
person
can't contact with family
for example
:thier parents so
that is
bad for
this
person
.more over ,peolpe who lived individuallly I except in the future
this
peole
will be mantel painten so that will effect
this
person
are studying or doing exercises or playing football match There will be very bad for them
peole
.
To sum up
, the main point of positive is :
peole
are having freedom in
this
life
however
the main point of negative is people will be mantel painten in the future
that is
my perspective .
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Revisit the task question to ensure all parts are fully addressed; discuss both the reasons people choose to live alone and its positive and negative impacts with equal depth. Providing specific examples will help support your points better.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • individualism
  • self-fulfillment
  • economic factors
  • financial independence
  • technological advancements
  • social dynamics
  • autonomy
  • personal growth
  • loneliness
  • isolation
  • single households
  • energy consumption
  • affordability
  • social media
  • cohabitation
  • divorce rates
  • mental health
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