In recent times, many people are making the decision to live alone. What are the causes of this? Does it have positive or negative impacts?

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because it is freedom in

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life so it is important that people who have freedom in all in

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beautiful for any humans are living individually .

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,there are negative first point is

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can't contact with family

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Focus on clearly structuring your essay. Start with an introduction that clearly states your viewpoint and outlines the points you will discuss, followed by body paragraphs that each focus on a single main idea, and conclude with a summary of your views and how they were supported throughout your essay.

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Ensure your ideas are clearly and logically ordered within paragraphs, using linking words to connect ideas and paragraphs together. This helps your reader follow your argument more easily.

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Revisit the task question to ensure all parts are fully addressed; discuss both the reasons people choose to live alone and its positive and negative impacts with equal depth. Providing specific examples will help support your points better.

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Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

211 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

individualism
self-fulfillment
economic factors
financial independence
technological advancements
social dynamics
autonomy
personal growth
loneliness
isolation
single households
energy consumption
affordability
social media
cohabitation
divorce rates
mental health

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In recent times, many people are making the decision to live alone. What are the causes of this? Does it have positive or negative impacts?

Fully explain your ideas

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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

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