In recent times, many people are making the decision to live alone. What are the causes of this? Does it have positive or negative impacts?

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Nowadays .the majority of people are making decisions to live alone in

this

essay I am discussing the positive and negative views.

Firstly

.there are a lot of advantages so , first is good for any

person

because it is freedom in

this

life so it is important that people who have freedom in all in

this

life the most important thing

for example

peole

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people

who need to buy

car

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a car

the car

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but without talking with

person

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a person

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or taking the opinion of

other

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another person

other people

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person

that is

fine

more over

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moreover

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, it is

nescarory

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miscarry

for any

person

to having

opinion

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an opinion

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about

any thing

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anything

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that is

beautiful for any humans are living individually .

Secondly

,there are negative first point is

this

person

can't contact with family

for example

:thier parents so

that is

bad for

this

person

.more over ,peolpe who lived individuallly I except in the future

this

peole

will be mantel painten so that will effect

this

person

are studying or doing exercises or playing football match There will be very bad for them

peole

To sum up

, the main point of positive is :

peole

are having freedom in

this

life

however

the main point of negative is people will be mantel painten in the future

that is

my perspective .

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211 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

individualism
self-fulfillment
economic factors
financial independence
technological advancements
social dynamics
autonomy
personal growth
loneliness
isolation
single households
energy consumption
affordability
social media
cohabitation
divorce rates
mental health

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