The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart
compare
the difference Change the verb form
compares
of
the cutting tools between 1.4 Change preposition
in
millions
and 0.8 Change to singular
million
miliion
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million
year
ago.
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years
Overall
, the size of cutting
remained Correct article usage
the cutting
unchange
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unchanged
while
the size of the cutter became larger. On the other hand
, the cutter became thinner significantly.
In detail, both
Change preposition
in both
front
view and the back view, the Correct article usage
the front
tool
in
0.8 Change preposition
apply
million
year
ago was huger than that in 1.4 Change to a plural noun
years
million
years ago.
In term
of cutting size, both of the Fix the agreement mistake
terms
tools
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tool's
tools'
instrument
could chop the thing in 5cm. When we look at the side view of the tools, we can observe that Fix the agreement mistake
instruments
tool
B is much thinner than tool
A.
The shape of the cutter in
0.8 Change preposition
apply
million
year
ago showed more dimension than that in 1.4 Change to a plural noun
years
million
years ago. Furthermore
, tool
B was in lighter grey colour than tool
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