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The maps belowshow an industrial area in the town ofNorbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 150 words

The maps belowshow an industrial area in the town ofNorbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 150 words
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The diagrams compare the difference between the town planning of the Norbition industrial area and its future development plan.
Overall
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, the type of land use will change from industrial lands to residential land use.
Moreover
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, more facilities are going to be constructed for the residents nearby. In detail, the factories are going to be abolished and houses will be built. The residential area will extend to the place near the farmland and the town.
This
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 leads to an increase in the size of residential land use and
hence
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 the roads will be extended
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 the size of farmland. As there are more residents in future, we can observe that shops, medical centres, playgrounds and schools will be set up to fulfil the needs of citizens.
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, with more buildings in future, there will be more roads than before.

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