The maps belowshow an industrial area in the town ofNorbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 150 words
#maps #belowshow #area #town #ofnorbiton #future #development #site #summarise #information #features #comparisons
The diagrams compare the difference between the town planning of the Norbition industrial area and its future development plan.
Overall
, the type of land use will change from industrial lands to residential land use. Linking Words
Moreover
, more facilities are going to be constructed for the residents nearby.
In detail, the factories are going to be abolished and houses will be built. The residential area will extend to the place near the farmland and the town. Linking Words
This
leads to an increase in the size of residential land use and Linking Words
hence
the roads will be extended Linking Words
and
Correct word choice
apply
Wrong verb form
resulting
result
in Wrong verb form
resulting
Correct article usage
a
the
decrease Correct article usage
a
Change preposition
in
of
the size of farmland.
As there are more residents in future, we can observe that shops, medical centres, playgrounds and schools will be set up to fulfil the needs of citizens. Change preposition
in
Therefore
, with more buildings in future, there will be more roads than before.Linking Words
Submitted by lammanying99 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.