Some people believe that children should obey rules and listen to their parents and teachers; Some others believe that less control will help children deal with their adult life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many schools of thought have been advocating for more elders to loosen their authority

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their

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, others pose that

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should be taught

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polite and obedient to their parent's and teacher's set of

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essay

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I will dwell upon both of these

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and

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elaborate on why I think the latter option is more suitable for the construction of a better

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. First and foremost, it is important for

children

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to be aware that parents and teachers are figures of authority.

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,

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and

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them by following their

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, certainly

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and

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paramount values

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as discipline and respect; which are not alien to

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contexts in life,

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, work or university. Acting towards obeying or at least respecting

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, are part of what it means to live in a civilized

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. If

children

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do not comply with

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minimal aspects, they

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definetly

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definitely

fixed

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their mindset into not respecting laws in general

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and could generate irremediable consequences

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as being involved in

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delinquency

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could be illustrated by a recent study made by VOX, where the major crime rates were committed by juveniles, who had not been involved from early stages to respect their elders; parents or

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anyone but themselves. Despite the discouraging panorama presented earlier, some

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still advocate for their

children

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to have more freedom; in terms of not following certain types

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rules

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, or just

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able to express their opinion without any concern

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what

people

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might think.

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could have its own advantages, as

children

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may form and hone their own

opinions

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from an early age,

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pivoting what they think or

opinate

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operate

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about certain subjects.

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, in

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cultures

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quite common for

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or juveniles to be quite

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to

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strong

opinions

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about controversial themes

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since they take into consideration a range of factors

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as their parent's or

teacher's

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opinions

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could be known as an effect

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a strong hierarchal system, which coaxes

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into being more passive than

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aggressive

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more

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condescend

con-descent

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towards power figures. Taking into consideration both perspectives, I would certainly lean towards the first opinion. As it may sound controversial for the

openly

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mindset that many

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have nowadays. To follow and obey

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are just basic elements of the contract of

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, which prevents populations

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going off their ways and

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in anarchy. In conclusion,

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it is important to give

children

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a certain kind of freedom

for expressing

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their

opinions

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or thoughts around themes,

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could not eclipse the wide urgency for them to learn, from a very young age, the aspects or the foundations of the civilized societies, which

primarly

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primarily

consist in following

rules

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or respecting their elders.

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, by

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these things into consideration, we can learn to reciprocate and

propell

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good values that would transform and aid

society

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as a whole.