Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some would argue that

children

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their competitive skills,

while

others

deem that they should have to teach the benefits of teamwork

instead

of being competitive.

While

the feeling of competition always triggers them to be successful in their task, I believe that cooperation teaches them how to assist

others

. Highlighting the first aspect, competitive skill helps the adults to pre-set their goal. In order to get success in every field whether it would be study or sports they can indulge themselves to become a successful person by giving cut-throat competition to their opponents. Competitive examinations

such

as civil services

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more likely in India,

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tough to crack owing to the high competition among youth.

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,

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assure

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competitive

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nature is leading

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youngsters to choose an unethical path to

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success because they feel demotivated when they are unable to achieve their goals. Shifting to another aspect,''Coperation''is perhaps the most prominent tool in

competitive

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epoch.

Children

will not only learn the

team work

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stratgies

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strategies

but

also

they can

enhnace

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enhance

their intellectual skills

while

lending a helping hand to

others

.To be more specific,they

emphaise

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emphasise

emphasis

on work with

others

instead

of

struglling

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struggling

alone.

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best illustration can be seen in school projects , the primary motive is to teach the

children

how they can move forward with the assistance of their peers.

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agree that

children

can develop their interpersonal skills and help

others

in their difficult

situation

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recaptiulate

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recapitulate

,

although

through competitive nature

children

can make their success goals,

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believe that

coperation

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cooperation

helps them to get their aim

while

providing

assisatnce

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assistance

to

others

.