Unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs ( for example, working for charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to the younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many think secondary school students should give back to the public by rendering mandatory services. I disagree with that because, even though, partaking in these tasks is good. It can

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have a negative impact on their academic performance . On the one hand, high school programs are usually funded by the government.

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, it is only fair that students repay the support by offering

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help .

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, in Nigeria,

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secondary schools

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money is gotten from taxes of civil servants. And as

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, these scholars owe the society.

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, these act of kindness involves both time and energy.

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, it can cause a dip in academic performance because most

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scholars do not know how to balance work and education yet.

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, average learners who have academic challenges plus household chores and

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, have to work for the community, will be too tired

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of the day to even study.

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leads to poor educational achievements.

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, some learners have side jobs

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they get paid for working. And so, they do not have time for extra societal tasks. Because

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adding an extra compulsory task will be too cumbersome for their age and

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less productivity and poor grades. I disagree that high schools should make community assistance compulsory cause secondary school students most times struggle to work and read. And

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could have a negative effect

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their classroom performance. In conclusion,

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it is good to help the community.

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rendered voluntarily and not compulsorily .