The diagram shows how soft cheese is made
The flow chart illustrates the sequence of steps in the process of making soft cheese. The whole procedure can be divided into five stages.
The first stage involves mixing the water and milk in the container.
Then
the second stage starts with putting the mixture in the heater for cooling. This
process should be held at 5 degrees
Celsius
and last
for two hours
. After that, we are going to add some salt and carry out fermentation. In this
process, it will use 35 degrees
Celsius
for two hours
. Meanwhile
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mixture.
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next stage, it comes to evaporation. It Change preposition
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does
this
by evaporating the steam by holding it at 100 degrees
Celsius
for eight hours
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cooled
degrees
Celsius
for eight hours
. Then
we separate the soft cheese through two filters, and this
is the final product.Submitted by sunnylyu0165 on
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