The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given picture illustrates how a central library used to look 20 years ago, and how it is in
present
time.
Correct article usage
the present
Overall
, it can be seen that some changes have been implemented in the plan of the library. While
,
some Remove the comma
apply
featured
have been removed, some new Replace the word
features
aminities
have been added to the Correct your spelling
amenities
place
.
Looking at the details, to the right from the entrance there was a
enquiry desk where buying tickets, or Change the article
an
book
returns took Replace the word
booking
place
, but now a cafe is
replaced it. Verb problem
has
Also
, going further
up from the Enquiry desk, there was
adult non-fiction Change the verb form
were
books
, which is
no longer there, albeit you can find Correct subject-verb agreement
are
there
adult fiction Rephrase
apply
books
, an information desk, and three self-service machines instead
of
Correct word choice
apply
it
.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
In addition
, there were a pair of table
and chairs in the main hall of the library, which Fix the agreement mistake
tables
are
removed. To the left Wrong verb form
were
from
the entrance, a computer room is nestled, Change preposition
of
where
used to be a reading room for reading newspapers and magazines. Above the computer room is a Correct word choice
which
place
for all reference books
instead
of adult fiction books
which used to be here 20 years past, replaced to another position. To the farthest point from the entrance to the left, a new section is built, which is children's fiction books
with two sofas and where storytelling take
Change the verb form
takes
place
. this
area was for CDs, videos and computer games.Submitted by sindokhtdadjoo2000 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "instead".
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words place, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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