The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates
consumption
rate of fast food eaten the teenagers Correct article usage
the consumption
of
Change preposition
in
Australian
in terms of varieties and prices between 1975 and 2000.
From an Correct your spelling
Australia
overall
perspective, Hamburgers kind of fast food was the most preference among the terns. Another interesting Linking Words
noticable
change was Fish and Chips Correct your spelling
noticeable
was
popular in Correct subject-verb agreement
were
initial
time Correct article usage
the initial
then
it was placed Linking Words
the
least preferable.
In detail, fish a be chips Change preposition
as the
was
the majority Change the verb form
were
teens
prefer 1975, at 100 Change preposition
of teens
times
per year Use synonyms
while
other two dishes Linking Words
such
as hamburgers and pizza had only below 15 Linking Words
times
. In 1980, Use synonyms
fish
and chips addition rate Correct article usage
the fish
was
decreased slightly, which Unnecessary verb
apply
is
82 Wrong verb form
was
times
, Use synonyms
thereafter
, there was a slight increase in 1985, which Linking Words
is
95 Wrong verb form
was
times
and from 1985 to 2000, there was a rapid decrease, from 95 Use synonyms
times
to 39 Use synonyms
times
.
Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
hamburgers
in 1975, American teens preferred the least amount, at 10 Change preposition
for hamburgers
times
, after that, it was a significant increase between 1975 and 1995 and reached 100 Use synonyms
times
. Use synonyms
Then
, from 1995 to 2000, there was a fluctuation and it was the most popular fast food end of the year among teens. Linking Words
Similarly
, pizza, from 1975 to 1995, there was Linking Words
a
rapid growth and reached from 5 Remove the article
apply
times
to 82 Use synonyms
times
Use synonyms
then
it Linking Words
was remained
stable until 2000.Change to the active voice
remained
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Vocabulary: Replace the words times with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rapid" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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