The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons

the picture

illustrate

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illustrates

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the data

how

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on how

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bricks

were made for the building industry and

contained

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contains

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some steps before being delivered first of all, clay

are

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is

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obtained from raw

materail

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material

after digging the ground which is

then

passed through the metal grid before placing

on

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it on

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the rollers. next sand and water are

mix

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mixed

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with clay and delivered to either

making

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make

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a brick through wire- cutting method or using a moulding technique

following

this

these

bricks

are dry in the over for two days straight

furthermore

, after

drying

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the drying

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process

it

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they

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then

delivered

in

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to

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akiln

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a kiln

first heated at 200-980

degree

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degrees

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after that the temperature goes higher to 870-1300

degree

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degrees

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after free from

heating

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the heating

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process the

bricks

are placed in

cooling

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a cooling

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chamber where are they are cool for about 48 to 72 hours and

finally

the

bricks

are packed and ready to be delivered

overall

, it is vividly manifested that the process

contain

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contains

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seven steps

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beginning

begining

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beginning

with digging the clay and ending

up

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apply

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with the delivery stage