The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates the
number
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of families categorized by their yearly earnings in 3 milestones - 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
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, it is evident that groups of
households
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earning less than 50 000
dollars
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showed an initial upward trend from 2007 to 2011 and
then
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surged
while
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the two categories with the highest income experienced the opposite.
In addition
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, the
number
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of
households
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with an income ranging from 75 000 to under 100 000
dollars
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per
year
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remained unchanged during the whole period. Regarding families earning less than $ 50,000 a
year
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, they both reached a peak in 2011. Specifically, there were approximately 24
million
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and 30
million
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households
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earning less than 25,000
dollars
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and from 25,000 to 49,999
dollars
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, respectively. In the
last
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year
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of the period, these two categories both decreased by 1
million
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each. Turning to the 3 remaining groups, the
number
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of
households
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earning from 75 000 to less than 100 000
dollars
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yearly was about half of the group earning more than 120 000
dollars
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, which were nearly 15
million
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and 30
million
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in turn. In the next 4 years, they rose slightly and
then
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peaked at 15
million
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and 33
million
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in the final
year
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.
Additionally
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, the
number
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of the group with middle income (ranging from $50 000 to $75 000 each
year
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) stayed the same at 21
million
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during the 3 milestones.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, households, dollars, year, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual income
  • households
  • income distribution
  • peak
  • rise
  • fall
  • stable
  • significant
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • economic conditions
  • policy changes
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