The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Write at least 150 words.
Contained in the diagram is information pertaining to how the energy is trapped by
greenhouse
gases
from the Sun. Overall
, people 's inventions release the
Correct article usage
apply
greenhouse
gases
which trap the heat in the atmosphere
The initial stage focuses on how diffent
ways people release Correct your spelling
different
greenhouse
gasses. Begining
with Verb problem
It begins
the
transportation Correct article usage
apply
as well as
the factory which use fossil fuel
to run when Fix the agreement mistake
fuels
the
Correct article usage
apply
machine
burn that fuel causing lots of Fix the agreement mistake
machines
gases
causing greenhouse
effect. Add an article
a greenhouse
the greenhouse
Moreover
, the amount
of trees Change the quantifier
number
drop
causing the amount of carbon dioxide Correct subject-verb agreement
drops
is
absorbed Unnecessary verb
apply
decreased
Change the verb form
to decrease
by
time to time.
Accumulating Change preposition
from
greenhouse
gases
which is
not being absorbed by the tree trap the heat from sunlight is the focus Change the verb form
are
on
Change preposition
of
later
step. By the time the sunlight Add an article
the later
a later
arrive
Change the verb form
arrives
to
Earth, it will be neither radiated into space Change preposition
on
or
reflected off Replace the word
nor
Correct article usage
the amosphere
amosphere
. Alternatively, the heat is trapped by the amount of Correct your spelling
atmosphere
greeenhouse
Correct your spelling
greenhouse
gases
that human activities release.Submitted by goodnight on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words greenhouse, gases with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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