In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays printed
newspapers
is
not as much popular as before.Some Change the verb form
are
people
think that it will be unsold due to
the fact that people
have access to the
online Correct article usage
apply
newspapers
without any cost. In my opinion,I completely agree with this
statement.
Firstly
, environment
is a big issue in recent times and Add an article
the environment
people
are aware of it. Printed newspapers
needs
wood, which is why Change the verb form
need
people
cut down make
lots of trees and make paper out of Verb problem
apply
it
. Correct pronoun usage
them
In addition
, they wasted lot
of wood to make paper. Thinking all these reasons, Change the article
a lot
people
are avoiding printed newspapers
to save our environment rather than faces
natural Correct subject-verb agreement
face
calamity
. Fix the agreement mistake
calamities
For example
, people
all around the world are using Dropbox, Google Drive etc store documents because it help
us to reuse some documents again and again.Change the verb form
helps
Additionally
, its storage is free of cost and people
can share documents to
one another without paying.
Change preposition
with
Secondly
, booming
online industry with faster Correct article usage
the booming
internet
speed. Internet
created revolution
, which is why all over the world Correct article usage
a revolution
people
are using internet
Add an article
the internet
everyday
.Replace the word
every day
For
this
reason,they can easily read online newspapers
with the latest news
.In addition
,they can be up-to-date. In contrast
, printed newspapers
showed latest
Change the article
the latest
news
next
day so Correct article usage
the next
people
can
not get the Wrong verb form
could
news
in quick
time.Correct article usage
a quick
For instance
,any stock market news
,which can affect the share prices is
need to be updated as soon as possible,Unnecessary verb
apply
otherwise
people
can lose their investments.
In conclusion, rise
of Add an article
the rise
a rise
internet
and environmental issues teach Correct article usage
the internet
people
, why they should avoid paper based
Add a hyphen
paper-based
newspapers
and should read online based
Add a hyphen
online-based
newspapers
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coherence cohesion
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