The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints from passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The diagrams compare the difference
of
the actual and proposed Change preposition
between
punctuality
of a bus company, and the amount
of complaints made by passengers.
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number
Overall
, Both acutal
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actual
punctuality
and the number of criticism
are Fix the agreement mistake
criticisms
in
fluctating Change preposition
apply
trend
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trends
while
target punctuality
decreased throught
the year. The difference Correct your spelling
throughout
through
of
the estimated and real Change preposition
between
number
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numbers
were
similar with the difference not Change the verb form
was
exceed
5%.
In detail, the real Wrong verb form
exceeding
amount
of the bus arrived on time started with
85% in 1999 and dropped by 3% in 2000. Afterwards, it climbed to more than 84% in 2001 and fell to 84% in 2002. Eventually, the percentage of the actual ratio increased to Change preposition
at
near
85% in 2003.
In Change the word
nearly
term
of the target ratio of Fix the agreement mistake
terms
punctuality
, it began with the highest point at 86%, then
it remained unchange
for Correct your spelling
unchanged
year
. Add an article
a year
the year
However
, the ratio dropped slightly to 85% in 2001 and the
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apply
this
goal maintained
until 2002. Add a missing verb
was maintained
Lastly
, the proposed percentage reduced
to just less than 85%.
When it comes to the number of complaints, it started with around the quantity of 70 in 1999. Afterwards, it rocketed to the Add a missing verb
was reduced
amount
of 100 in 2000, followed by the
drop to just more than 80 in 2001. Correct article usage
a
However
, the dissatisfaction of passengers raised
again in 2002 with the Verb problem
rose
amount
of more than 100 and reached a peak at 120 in 2003.Submitted by lammanying99 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words punctuality, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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