In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax provate car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

Some people think that governments

shall

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implement strict taxes

to

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vehicles

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owners

as a

mean

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to improve public

transportation

and fix

traffic

issues. In

this

essay

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I will

disscuss

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discuss

both perspectives

,

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and state the main advantages or disadvantages

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such

measure

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. The main benefits

from

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taxation

to improve public

transportation

systems

would be the reduction of carbon emissions and

prevention

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of

traffic

jams. On one hand,

cars

fueled by oil emit a considerable amount of gases

to

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the atmosphere;

therefore

a way to minimize

this

damage would be the usage of public

transportation

, since trains, buses or metros do not release gases in the same amount as the vehicles.

According to

a recent study made by VOX, at least 50% of greenhouse gases are

emited

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emitted

by

cars

,

thus

restricting their movement would contribute to

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effects.

Moreover

, most of the

traffic

impeditions are

due to

the high rate of

cars

that

ocassionate

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passionate

traffic

jams at rush hours,

this

could be improved by people opting to make use of the public

transportation

systems

,

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since they are quite faster

in contrast

to private methods of transport;

in addition

to the fact that these public

transportation

systems

are well distributed around cities, have their rails or route, facilitating the flow of

cars

. As for the drawbacks,

heavily

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taxation

would provoke an

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imbalance

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of

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the

car

owners

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economy. To rely solely on citizen's contributions would detriment houses economy;

as well as

foster the possibility of

taxation

avoidance in order to maintain a balanced budget.

For example

, if a nuclear family owns one

car

and has one source of income, the

taxation

could affect their home finances, resulting in

prorrates

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prorates

of payments or not paying at all, in order to protest against those solutions. To illustrate, in third-world countries, where the

traffic

jams are quite remarkable, the local governments implemented

such

measures as heavily

taxate

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taxed

taxable

car

owners

. The result was the increase of crimes like tax

evation

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evasion

, since families would need the money to make ends meet, but at the same time, they

also

rely on their

cars

to manage their daily lives. In conclusion, the strict measure of

taxation

car

owners

could seem like the best solution to resolve

traffic

issues and enhance the usage of public

transportation

systems

.

Furthermore

, there is a need to balance the advantages

such

as environmental protection, and a better

traffic

flow, against its drawbacks, which consist

on

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the possibility of tax

evation

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evasion

. It is important to bear in mind that governments need to

convey

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efforts to find a better solution to

traffic

problems, in order to fix

traffic

issues.