In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax provate car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

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Some people think that governments
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implement strict taxes
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on
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vehicles
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owners
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as a
mean
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means
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to improve public
transportation
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and fix
traffic
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issues. In
this
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essay
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I will
disscuss
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discuss
both perspectives
,
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and state the main advantages or disadvantages
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such
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measure
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measures
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. The main benefits
from
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taxation
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to improve public
transportation
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systems
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would be the reduction of carbon emissions and
prevention
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the prevention
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of
traffic
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jams. On one hand,
cars
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fueled by oil emit a considerable amount of gases
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the atmosphere;
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a way to minimize
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damage would be the usage of public
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, since trains, buses or metros do not release gases in the same amount as the vehicles.
According to
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a recent study made by VOX, at least 50% of greenhouse gases are
emited
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emitted
by
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,
thus
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restricting their movement would contribute to
reduce
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this
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effects.
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, most of the
traffic
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impeditions are
due to
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the high rate of
cars
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that
ocassionate
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passionate
traffic
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jams at rush hours,
this
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could be improved by people opting to make use of the public
transportation
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systems
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,
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since they are quite faster
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to private methods of transport;
in addition
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to the fact that these public
transportation
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systems
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are well distributed around cities, have their rails or route, facilitating the flow of
cars
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. As for the drawbacks,
heavily
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heavy
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taxation
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would provoke an
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imbalance
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of
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in
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the
car
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owners
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owners'
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economy. To rely solely on citizen's contributions would detriment houses economy;
as well as
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foster the possibility of
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avoidance in order to maintain a balanced budget.
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, if a nuclear family owns one
car
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and has one source of income, the
taxation
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could affect their home finances, resulting in
prorrates
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prorates
of payments or not paying at all, in order to protest against those solutions. To illustrate, in third-world countries, where the
traffic
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jams are quite remarkable, the local governments implemented
such
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measures as heavily
taxate
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taxed
taxable
car
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owners
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. The result was the increase of crimes like tax
evation
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evasion
, since families would need the money to make ends meet, but at the same time, they
also
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rely on their
cars
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to manage their daily lives. In conclusion, the strict measure of
taxation
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car
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owners
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could seem like the best solution to resolve
traffic
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issues and enhance the usage of public
transportation
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systems
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.
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, there is a need to balance the advantages
such
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as environmental protection, and a better
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flow, against its drawbacks, which consist
on
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of
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the possibility of tax
evation
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evasion
. It is important to bear in mind that governments need to
convey
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make
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efforts to find a better solution to
traffic
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problems, in order to fix
traffic
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issues.
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