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The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart displays information on the amount of bananas purchased by the four countries over a ten-year period in US
dollars
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Overall
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, it is evident that Japan was recorded at the top of the list,
while
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 the least changes in volume could be seen by the USA.
To begin
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 with, from 1994 to 1995, Japan showed a huge surge in the price of bananas per
kilogram
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, since it went from 2
dollars
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 to almost 3
dollars
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 per
kilogram
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However
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, it has fallen to the lowest of approximately 1.5
dollars
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 in the year 2001. After that, Japan rose to the top again with 2.5
dollars
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 per
kilogram
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. Germany kept on ranging between 1.2
dollars
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 to 1.5
dollars
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.
Furthermore
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, France has
also
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 shown some gradual changes and never made a new high,
instead
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 it kept on making the latest lows. Apart from that, the USA illustrates it has always been
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above the
 1dollar per
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 mark since 1995 and never crashed nor rose to unique highs over the period of ten years.
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