The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors-agriculture, manufacturing and businessand financial service-to the uk economy in the twentieth century summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The bar chart illustrates the support given by 3 fields - Agriculture , manufacturing, and

business

and financial services to the UK financial system in the twentieth century.

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contribution from the 3 sectors for the

economy

of the nation remain

steadily

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during the first half of the twentieth century and

reduce

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drastically over the

secound

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second

half.

Business

and financial field

contribution

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to the

economy

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increased during the period dramatically

while

Agricultural

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and Manufacturing areas, support dropped significantly. In detail, in a comparison of the year 1900 ,around 50% of the

economy

was

depended

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on agriculture

and

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nearly another 45% on manufacturing , and slightly less than 5% on

business

and financial services.

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,

business

and financial services support increased

in

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a considerable amount to achieve the highest around 35% for the year 2000.

Otherthan

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Other than

that, the total contribution of 3 fields

were

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nearly 99% of the

economy

in 1900 and remained

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same level till 1950 ,

while

it declined over the next 50 years to post approximately 60% in 2000.