Task 1: (Table) The table below gives information related to population growth, average birth per woman, life expectancy at birth in countries with different income levels in 2000 and 2004. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant.
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The data presented in the
table
outlines population
growth
rates, average births per woman
, and life
expectancy
at birth
across countries
categorized by income
levels for the years 2000 and 2004.
Overall
, the table
shows difference
between Add an article
the difference
countries
, high
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high-income
income
countries
has
Change the verb form
have
least
Correct article usage
the least
population
growth
, but the biggest life
expectancy
. Middle
Add a hyphen
Middle-income
income
countries
have higher birth
rates, but lower life
expectancy
. And low income
countries
have the highest population
growth
, but they’r
Correct your spelling
their
life
expectancy
is significantly lower than in two
previous Correct article usage
the two
countries
.
as the table
shows, high
Add a hyphen
high-income
income
countries
from 2002 to 2004 increasing
in Wrong verb form
increased
life
expectancy
at birth
from 78.0 to 78.7 but the population
growth
is decreasing
from 0.8 % in 2002 and 0.7% in 2004. average Wrong verb form
decreased
birth
per woman
stagnates at 1.7 throughout the given period .
Then
there are middle
Add a hyphen
middle-income
income
countries
. They have higher population
growth
, higher
average Correct word choice
and higher
birth
per woman
, but lower life
expectancy
at birth
than high
Add a hyphen
high-income
income
countries
. The population
growth
did not change in the time period, but the birth
per woman
decreased slightly. Life
expectancy
got longer, from 69,1 to 70 years.
Next in the table
come low
Add a hyphen
low-income
income
countries
. They have lowest
Correct word choice
a lower
life
expectancy
than two
previous Correct article usage
the two
countries
, especially high income
, but have higher population
growth
and average birth
per woman
. The population
growth
decreased trough
yearsChange preposition
over trough
,
but still remains Remove the comma
apply
the
top. Change preposition
at the
Same
can be said about Correct article usage
The same
average
Correct article usage
the average
birth
per woman
, it decreased,
but still remains higher than Remove the comma
apply
high
Add a hyphen
high-income
income
countries
. Life
expectancy
increased from 58,1 to 58,8, remaining lowest
out of Correct article usage
the lowest
three
.Correct article usage
the three
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