You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015.  

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map depicts the changes that took place on the outskirts of Fosbury’s town between 1980 and 2015 and how modernized the town has become after 35 years.
Overall
, there were a number of notable changes to the buildings and amenities in
this
area
. In 1980, the city was greener, making the whole
area
eco-friendly for its residents.
However
, the outskirts of Fosbury were dramatically transformed until 2015. The most striking
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is the roundabout constructed in the centre of the city, which expands the roads for the flow of cars. Another significant change is that fields were converted into warehouses. The park was relocated to the centre of the town, and terraced houses were constructed in its
area
. Another major change to the
area
is that houses and hotels remained the same
while
Glocer’s shop and block of flats were completely demolished. Tennis courts were transformed into sports centres offering tennis, football, and rugby facilities. Another obvious change is that the supermarket and the car park replaced the terraced houses.
To sum up
, the
area
was extensively renovated, seeing fundamental changes to its roads, warehouses, and commercial and recreational facilities.
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