The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.
The two pie charts provide information about the proportion of online purchases for goods sectors in Canada between 2005 and 2010. In
generally
, it can clearly be seen that Change the word
general
the
computer games and foodstuffs and beverages were upward trends Correct article usage
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whereas
interior decorations and electronics and device
were downward trends during a 5-year period.
Looking at data in more detail, in Fix the agreement mistake
devices
term
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was
noticeably rose from 22 per Unnecessary verb
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cent
to 32 per cent
, which is the highest increment within 5 years. Similary
, the number of PC games was Correct your spelling
Similarly
significant
increased around 18 per Change the adjective
significantly
cent
in 2005 to 23 per cent
in 2010.
Conversely
, the percentage of house furnishings was
declined dramatically from 25 per Unnecessary verb
apply
cent
to 15 percent
respectively, which Change the spelling
per cent
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last
place in 2010. Furthermore
, the porprotion
of electronics and gadgets was Correct your spelling
proportion
maginal
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marginal
magical
decrease
from 35 per Wrong verb form
decreased
cent
to 30 percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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