The maps below show the present building of a college and plan for changes to the college site in future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The maps illustrate the method for changes to the college site. Some main features are added in the new building and some changes are
also
shown in the program.
Overall
, the major change in the building is the entrance shifted to in front of the main road. On the other hand
, minor differences in the college will be the toilet shift to the backside of the school.
However
, the education complex will expand its area in system
Add an article
the system
as well
as
the footpath and garden Correct word choice
and
also
removed from it. Firstly
, car parking will be left side of the college and increase the range of vehicles and it will be outside the complex in the boundaries. According to
the project when will enter the school through the main entry gate then
the library will look left side and the reception will centre of the school. Also
, a new shop will be built in the left corner.
Furthermore
, all classrooms will shift right of the corner in a row and the left side will be the working place. Car and bus stop signs will remain the same.Submitted by psingh8059 on
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