Air pollution is one of the largest problems the world is facing today. What measures can be proposed to solve this problem?

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In our modern era, the issue regarding
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air
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pollution
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has become widely disputed throughout the whole
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. Some people believe that
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pollution
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is not becoming the enormous trouble that the
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is facing these days. Several factors and solutions will be provided in the following paragraphs. On the
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hand,
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pollution
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is
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of the biggest problems
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the entire
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is facing current time.
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of the solutions can be replacing
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cars
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cars
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may reduce harm to
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pollution
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and the
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.
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of the
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.
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, the government may reduce price of the electricity which may influence to people buy
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cars
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more than
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cars
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.
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, it may reduce
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pollution
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.
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drawback of replacing
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cars
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with
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cars
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is that the value of
petrol
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may be reduced in the future cause of the replacement of
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, There is another factor that can damage
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pollution
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is the production of materials or items by factories and spreading the Co2 emissions.
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possible solution to address
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issue is reducing factories.
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positive outcome of
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solution is less
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pollution
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.
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,
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drawback of
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solution is the increasing unemployment in the entire
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. In conclusion, there are several types of damages to
air
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pollution
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that can be solved by two reasons that I provided .
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of them
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is replacing
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cars
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with
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cars
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. Another factor
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is reducing factories it may decrease damage to
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pollution
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