You went to another city for a training course and stayed at a friend's house for a week. They have been great hosts. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, thank them for having you at their house for a week express your gratitude for their hospitality say how much you miss them Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .................,

Dear Abhi, I hope
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letter finds you well. As you know
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come to
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your city for a week to study at
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satyed
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stayed
at your place. I really
apprecated
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appreciated
appreciate
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hospatiality
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hospitality
you have done for me. You went above and beyond
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me
confortable
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comfortable
at your place. The morning tea is different than usual
althought
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although
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loved it and
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want to know
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to make it.
moreover
,
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missed our dinner conversations that we had about
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life and the time we
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as
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. I really want you to come
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my place so that we can spend some time together and explore some new places
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together
. looking forward to
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you, Bharat Singla
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Spelling and Grammar
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Cohesion
Enhance cohesion by using a wider range of linking words and phrases to connect ideas more smoothly.
Clarity
Strive for clarity in expressing your thoughts. At times, the letter feels a bit disjointed, making it harder for the reader to follow.
Structure
Use paragraphing to structure your letter more effectively around the main points: thanking for the stay, expressing gratitude for the hospitality, and sharing how much you miss them.
Content Depth
Consider adding more details to enrich the content of your letter. For example, specific examples of the hospitality offered or particular memories that you cherish can provide a more vivid and engaging narrative.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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