The bar chart shows the highest qualification attained by sex for the working age population in wales in 2001/2002 summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relavant.

The bar chart shows the highest qualification attained by sex for the working age population in wales in 2001/2002

summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relavant.
The given bar chart illustrates the
hightest
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highest
qualification
obtained by gender for
the
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working age residents in
wales
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in 2001/2002.
Overall
,
although
degree
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a degree
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or a higher education
qualification
was less in
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in 20001/2002 , GCE A level or GCSE grade A-C level qualifications are comparatively greater in percentage. Other than that, males had
a
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slighty
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slightly
more
qualification
in higher
qulification
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qualification
exams compared to females. In detail, GCSE grade A-C or
equivalant
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equivalent
qualifications were more with the female , with a recorded value
slghtly
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slightly
below 30%, and nearly 10%
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difference
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males,
by contrast
in GCE A level males were more qualified than females with nearly the same 10% difference.
Furthermore
, boys
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a degree in approximately 14 % ,and girls achieved
same
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qualification
only in 11%, on the
contary
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contrary
, higher education qualifications
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achieved more by females with a approximately 2%
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.
However
, around 25%
girls
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had no
qualification
compared to that value of 20 % for the boys.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words qualification with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • qualification
  • attained
  • working age population
  • distribution
  • proportion
  • highly qualified
  • noticeable trends
  • patterns
  • significant
  • data
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