The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
The diagram depicts the stages involved in making
bricks
for the building industry.
Overall
, there are seven stages in brick manufacturing, starting with the digging of
clay
and finishing with delivering it to its destination.
Initially
, the
clay
is dug from the ground using a large digger, after which it is placed onto a metal grid which is utilized for breaking the
clay
into smaller pieces. Four rollers assist in
this
step. The next stage is to add water and sand to the
clay
and make brick from the mixture by putting it in either a wire cutter or a mould. As a subsequent stage, raw
bricks
are
then
put in an oven where they dry for between 1 and 2 days.
Subsequently
, after being dried in the oven, the
bricks
are heated in kilns
initially
at a moderate temperature (200-980 Celcius) and later at a high temperature (870-1300 Celcius), before undergoing a cooling process using a cooling chamber for 2 and 3 days. As a final step ready
bricks
are packaged and delivered to their target.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "initially".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bricks, clay with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • manufacture
  • bricks
  • building industry
  • process
  • dig
  • prepare
  • clay
  • mold
  • shape
  • dry
  • fire
  • kiln
  • cool
  • package
  • fired
  • overview
  • importance
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