The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last years. Discuss the causes and effect of this issue disturbing trend.

Over the

last

year, the proportion of childhood obesity in

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the western

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western

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country

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has risen

almost

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20

percent

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. The main reasons are

influence

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the influence

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of fast

food

and social media.

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essay will discuss all

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possible

causes and aftereffects of

this

negative trend. The main cause of

this

problem is

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the influence

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of

fastfood

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fast food

fast-food

. That can make

children

gain

thier

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their

weight

due to

pocket

food

easily accessible

with

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at

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very low

price

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prices

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.

Moreover

, over the

year

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their

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has been

significant

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increased

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increase

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the

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in the

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number of

fastfood

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fast

restuarants

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restaurants

.

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, most

of

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apply

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junk

food

restuarants

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restaurants

have

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located near

school

areas and every high

streets

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such

as Pizza Hut or McDonald's.

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Furthermore

, the

food

in

this

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these

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places has been proven to be very unhealthy.

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, the amount of

the

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children

has increased

with in

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within

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one year. The effects of

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has

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been and will continue to be more serious.

Firstly

, junk foods can cause

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diabetes, high blood pressure, and some heart disease in kid's health. Diabetes

disease has

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mean child has to be injected

insulin

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with insulin

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and

suffered

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from chronic illness

also

very overweight

children

often experience bullying

from

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school

social

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, which might

effect

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affect

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thier

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their

mental health status and

school

performances

that

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and

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might

effect

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affect

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low self-esteem .

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,

the

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singapore's report found that

children

who

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form

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from

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diabetes

has

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shown

school

grade

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droped

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dropped

more than kids who good healthy. In conclusion, it is several

cause

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causes

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there

are

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cuase

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cause

of overweight among

children

,

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and

variety

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a variety

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of negative effects. Society must ensure steps are taken to prevent

this

problem from deteriorating

further

.