Some people think that children should be homeschooled when they are very young while others think it is better for them to attend a kindergarten. Which do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It argued that homeschooling

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the

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toddlers is the best option in comparison with

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them to

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kindergarten

. In my personal opinion, attending

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kindergarten

is the best option for

children

in their early childhood for two main reasons.

First,

conventional

kindergarten

is much more efficient in budget.

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for socialization which

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important factor for

youngster

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mental development only can be fulfilled by attending

kindergarten

.

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with, homeschooling is well-known as

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expensive form of education. The cost of

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teacher and

nessecity

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to provide the means of teaching

such

as educational toys are two of many reasons why homeschooling is applicable only

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the haves. On the other, those costly things can be found in the conventional

kindergarten

. All the teachers and the supporting facilities are not personal

obligation

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development so

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children

will

socially

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healthy in the future is the most vital pillar

on

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early childhood education. Homeschooling can't answer that need since most of the time it's only involving

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between a child with the personal teacher hired by parents.

Although

,

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group homeschooling

is

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also

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, it will not be able to solve the challenge because the spectrum of interaction is not as broad as in

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, conventional

kindergarten

.

To sum up

,

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present in

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kindergarten

is better than having

homeschool

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homeschooling

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for the

children

because of its

affordabillity

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affordability

and its benefit for the mental development of

children

by allowing them to be involved in social interaction with other

children

in a broader spectrum.