You are visiting a town where you once worked. Write to a friend you worked with there. Include the following in your letter: 1. Tell your friend about your life now. 2. Give her details of your visit. 3. Arrange how you can meet.
Dear Larry Smith,
Hello, I hope you are well. I am writing
this
letter because I am going to the town where I once worked. I would like to work there, because of my well-paid job.
First of all, I want to say about my bad life. I am not at all, pleased that, I failed the university entrance exams. To make matters worse, all the businesses do not accept me because I have not two years of experience in a job.
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, I have to visit your town, Linking Words
that is
Canada. I once worked for your called "Complete Help" company. Added to Linking Words
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, I studied history in college so I know about a law business.
I appreciate it if you would like to meet with me on the Ocean for two weeks. Linking Words
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, we will talk about my future job and all your life. So we visit a seafood restaurant and eat fish or lobster. Linking Words
Furthermore
, we sing chanty on the sea. I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. I cordially invite you to join me.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Pariy.Linking Words
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Task Achievement
To improve your task response, ensure that the letter fully addresses all three bullet points with clear and detailed information. Mention more about your current life, provide specific details about your visit, and outline a clear plan for meeting.
Coherence and Cohesion
Consider revising the structure of your letter to ensure a logical flow of ideas. Each paragraph should focus on a single point related to the task. Use transition words to improve the connection between paragraphs.
Coherence and Cohesion
While your greeting and closing are appropriate, ensure that the body of the letter is organized and each idea is expanded upon in its own paragraph for clearer communication.
Task Achievement
For a more suitable writing tone, maintain a balance between formality and personal touch. Reflect on the relationship with your friend and adjust the tone accordingly, ensuring it matches the context of a personal letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,