There is no denying
fact that nowadays the majority of countries
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women
equally
withChange preposition
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a Correct the article-noun agreement
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men
in terms of
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and
rightFix the agreement mistake
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.
While
it is a commonly held belief
women
should
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work full-time.There are
also
an argument
opposesCorrect pronoun usage
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it.In my opinion,
iChange the capitalization
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consider that
women
working full-time
it Correct pronoun usage
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would be a huge benefit not only for
economicCorrect article usage
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system but
also
to utilizeChange preposition
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herCorrect pronoun usage
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skills.
To begin
with,
SupportReplace the word
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women
is really crucial to
improvCorrect your spelling
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our community because when she
workingWrong verb form
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full-time she
getChange the verb form
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payedCorrect your spelling
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sameCorrect article usage
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menChange noun form
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.
In other
There are many advantages to
makeWrong verb form
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women
working full-time
women
more
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and most
of Change preposition
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customerFix the agreement mistake
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preferAdd the particle
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make
dealFix the agreement mistake
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with female
workerFix the agreement mistake
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than
maleFix the agreement mistake
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.In
,Time management could help
women
to do household
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their job.
For example
,
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the
last
study in
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the most successful
women
those working full day.
Another point to consider,sharing responsibility is important.
Men
should
be havingWrong verb form
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knowledgeChange the article
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to deal with house
taskFix the agreement mistake
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and look after kids.It is possible to say that life
needChange the verb form
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more cooperation it
helpChange the verb form
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women
to less
and
decreaseChange the verb form
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the conflict with
men
.
moreoverCapitalize word
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,
familyFix the agreement mistake
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with two parents
employeesCorrect word choice
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are much
versusChange preposition
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with their not working.
For instance
,
although
many negative
for kids, their parents
workingWrong verb form
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full-time but still
havingWrong verb form
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goodAdd an article
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chance to live their life without budget
.
In conclusion,
people having different views.I believe that the main purpose of the government
toAdd a missing verb
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engage
women
in the job market because they
beliefReplace the word
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they can work like
maleFix the agreement mistake
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.