Write a letter to your neighbour about the damage that occurred to your car while he was parking his car in the lane outside your home. In the letter, you should: describe the damage say how you feel about this problem suggest to him what actions he should take.

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Dear Thomas, I hope you are doing well, I am writing a letter pertaining to one problem which I came across

hence

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I feel that I must tell you as a good neighbourhood.

Last

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night, I noticed that you parked your

car

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outside my home I have no problem but unfortunately

while

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parking your

car

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you damaged my

car

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from

right-side

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the right-side

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front

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the front

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door

and

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apply

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which is not under insurance, it is giving me a problem as I will have to bring my

car

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at garage and

also

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need to spend money from my pocket only. I can

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understand

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under stand

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understand

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that, you are well trained driver and know about all parking rules and regulations but you parked

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car

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a car

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in my area which is dedicated and

alloted

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allowed

for my vehicles

not

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, not

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for others, I request you, please

going

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ahead Please do not park

you

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your

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car

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this

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area and use your dedicated parking area to avoid

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kind of

problems

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problem

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. I

will

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look

forword

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forward

to your positive response on

same

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the same

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and wish

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you a

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have

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apply

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great time ahead. Thank you for your understanding. Regards, Rahul

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coherence cohesion

Be sure to fully develop each paragraph with clear explanations of your points. Ensure that each paragraph contains a single, clear idea that is expanded upon with examples or explanations.

coherence cohesion

Maintain a consistent logical flow throughout your letter by clearly connecting your ideas and using appropriate transitional phrases.

coherence cohesion

Include a proper greeting and closing to adhere to the formalities of letter writing. While you've done this, refining your language to be more formal or appropriate can improve the overall tone.

task achievement

Ensure your letter addresses all parts of the task. Describe the damage in more detail, express your feelings more vividly, and provide a clearer and more formal suggestion for how your neighbour can rectify the situation.

task achievement

Use a tone that is suitable for writing to a neighbour. While maintaining politeness, ensure your message is clear and your request is assertively made, without sounding aggressive or overly casual.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

184 words

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Write a letter to your neighbour about the damage that occurred to your car while he was parking his car in the lane outside your home. In the letter, you should: describe the damage say how you feel about this problem suggest to him what actions he should take.

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homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world. what do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures can be taken to solve it?