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The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The table chart illustrates the consumer durables
about
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 central heating,
television
, video,
vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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,
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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, washing
machine
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machines
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,
dishwasher
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dishwashers
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 and
telephone
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telephones
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 between 1972 and 1983 in Britain.
Overall
, in
this
 table
chart
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chart,
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 the most used items were
television
,
vacuum
 cleaner and refrigerator
therefore
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, the least used equipment were video and dishwasher.
Its
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 crystal clear that in
1972’s
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 the most popular electronic devices were
television
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televisions
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 and
vacuum
 cleaners and most of the Britain population got them above 93% and 87% in 1972, respectively. The number of televisions had been increased steadily from 1972 to 1983.
Besides
, as we can see in the chart It's just that the number of
television
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televisions
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were
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increased year by year. The percentage of central heating,
vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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refrigerator
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refrigerators
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, washing
machine
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machines
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 and
last
 but not least
telephone
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telephones
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were fluctuated
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in
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from
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 1972 to 1983.
However
; we couldn’t see dishwasher and video owners
in
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 1972 to 1976 and 1972 to 1982 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words television, vacuum with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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