the diagram shows the stages involed in the procss of making leather

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The given process

illutrates

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illustrates

illustrated

how to make

leather

in a factory.

Overall

, the process

consist

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of 9 stages commencing with drying the animal kin that will be washed and soaked before flattening

along with

polishing in order to

finally

be produced

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produce

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leather

product The initial stage

focus

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the

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drying the animal skin after treating the flesh and fur. The next

stages

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stage

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is delivering the

dryed

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dried

dry

skin to a specialized factory to

washed

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be washed

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the

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mixture of water and lime.

Following

this

step, the

leather

are

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soaked

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lime to prevent the growth of bacteria before

flattened

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being flattened

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by a certain machine

Subsequently

, the flattened

leather

is soaked again in tannin which

contained

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water and vegetable matter. The step

after

this

is polishing the

leather

to make it skier and softer. The whole process

terminate

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with

tranforming

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transforming

other factory

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another factory

other factories

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to create the

leather

product

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products

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such

bags

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as bags

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shoes

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and shoes

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the diagram shows the stages involed in the procss of making leather

Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study for part or all of their courses in foreign countries. While studying abroad brings many benefits to individual students, it also has a number of disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think the best way to learn new things is to study them alone. Others think that it is always better to get help from a skilled teacher. Discuss both views and give your opinion