The tables above show sales of fair trade coffee and bananas in five countries in Europe in 1999 and 2004.

The tables above show sales of fair trade coffee and bananas in five countries in Europe in 1999 and 2004.
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The given table charts compare the
sales
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of Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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and
bananas
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in five European countries, namely The
UK
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, Switzerland,
Denmark
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, Belgium, and
Sweden
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in terms of
euros
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in the years 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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, it can be observed that The
UK
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was by far the best market leader in both the
coffee
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and
bananas
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trade
while
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Sweden
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was the lowest among other countries. In 1999,
whereas
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the
UK
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was moderately different from
Denmark
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(1.8 mlns of
euros
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) in
coffee
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sales
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, it achieved the highest rank with 20
mln
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€ in 2004. In Belgium and Switzerland, the
sales
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of
coffee
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doubled and reached 1.7 and 6 million
euros
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in 2004 respectively.
However
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, there were slight increases in
Denmark
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and
Sweden
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only by 0.2
mln
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euros
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in
coffee
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sales
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. Interestingly, in the
UK
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,
bananas
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revenue was 15mln
euros
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in 1999 and nearly tripled in 2004. Like the
UK
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, Switzerland and
Denmark
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increased to 5.5 and 4
mln
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€ respectively in fair trade
bananas
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. In spite of the three countries'
sales
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achievements, Belgium and
Sweden
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underwent decreases approximately by 1
mln
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euros
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.
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