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the amount of shops that closed and opened since 2011 until 2018

#amount #shops
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amount
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number
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 of shops that closed and opened
since
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from
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 2011 until 2018. As we can see, the
overall
 patterns remained the same between the
closures
 and
openings
 numbers, with little differences. Both
closures
 and
openings
 numbers were decreased in 2012 and 2015.
However
, the lowest
number
 was by the
closures
 in 2015, with only 1000 at the time.
This
 amount was an extreme change from other years which showed the range of
closures
 numbers from 5000-7200, which means 4000-6200
closures
 different from the other years.
Although
 closure's lowest point showed an extreme change, the opening's minimum point was only about 1000 different from the year before.
Hence
, it showed that the fluctuation wasn't as great as the
closures
. The maximum
number
 was shown by the shop
openings
 in 2011. It reached about 8500
openings
, which differ by about 1000 from the
number of
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maximum
number
 of
closures
at
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in
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 2013.
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